According to the
institution called, “KIDSHEALTH” majority of the child watch TV more than 2
hours a day. Then, what effects has TV had on the child? Everyone watches TV every day. Not
only adults do but also kids. Letting kids watch TV makes them focused on it,
which makes their parents less suffer from their kids and do their work. Of
course, it has a good influence on them. Kids can enjoy an interesting program,
and it becomes a good subject of conversation among their peers. Also, there
are many educational programs such as learning HANGUEL, alphabet so that TV can
be a good friend to the child. However, TV has much more disadvantages than
advantages in both physical and psychological areas. Children from birth to age
five are actively growing, learning and developing habits that will shape their
physical and emotional health. Because this period of time is so crucial to the
development of a child’s body and brain, any negative influences can have
lifelong health effects. Excessive television viewing among young children has
been linked to negative impacts on early brain development, and lifelong
physical health.
First is obesity.
Health experts have long linked excessive TV-watching to obesity — a
significant health problem today. While watching TV, kids are inactive and tend
to snack. They're also bombarded with ads that encourage them to eat unhealthy
foods like potato chips and empty-calorie soft drinks that often become
preferred snack foods. According to the AAP, kids in the United States see
40,000 commercials each year. From the junk food and toy advertisements during
Saturday morning cartoons to the appealing promos on the backs of cereal boxes,
marketing messages inundate kids of all ages. And to them, everything looks
ideal — like something they simply have to have. It all sounds so appealing —
often, so much better than it is. Studies have shown that decreasing the
amount of TV kids watched led to less weight gain and lower body mass index
(BMI — a measurement derived from someone's weight and height).
Second is malfunction of the organ.
According to “MALE ONLINE”, Children as young as six are risking heart
problems in later life because they are allowed to spend too much time watching
TV or playing on computers, scientists warn. A study of 1,492 primary school pupils found that those who spent hours
glued to the screen suffered narrowing of blood vessels in their eyes.
They were an early warning sign of increased likelihood of heart disease
and high blood pressure. Also, the study which is carried out by Dr Bamini
Gopinath and a team of researchers at the University of Sydney says
that on average, children spent 1.9 hours per day watching TV or playing
on their computer had an average ‘retinal arteriolar’ narrowing of 2.3
microns. These show that the watching TV brings
functioning problem on organ.
Third is violence. The average American child will witness 200,000 violent
acts on television by age 18. Kids may become desensitized to violence and more
aggressive. TV violence sometimes begs for imitation because violence is often
promoted as a fun and effective way to get what you want. Many violent acts are
perpetrated by the "good guys," whom kids have been taught to admire.
Even though kids are taught by their parents that it's not right to hit,
television says it's OK to bite, hit, or kick if you're a good guy. This
paradox can lead to confusion when kids try to understand the difference
between right and wrong. And the "bad guys" on TV aren't always held
responsible or punished for their actions. Young kids are particularly
frightened by scary and violent images. Simply telling kids that those images
aren't real won't console them, because they can't yet distinguish between
fantasy and reality. Behavior problems, nightmares, and difficulty sleeping may
follow exposure to media violence. Older kids also can be frightened by violent
images, whether they appear on fictional shows, the news or reality-based
shows. Reasoning with kids this age will help them, so it's important to
provide reassuring and honest information to help ease fears. However, consider
not letting your kids view programs that they may find frightening.
Next is Risky Behavior. TV is full of programs and commercials that depict
risky behaviors (such as drinking alcohol, doing drugs, smoking cigarettes, and
having premarital sex) as cool, fun, and exciting. And often, there's no
discussion about the consequences of those actions. For example, studies have
shown that teens who watch lots of sexual content on TV are more likely to
initiate intercourse or participate in other sexual activities earlier than
peers who don't watch sexually explicit shows. Alcohol ads on TV have actual increased
over the last few years, and more underage kids are being exposed to them than
ever. A recent study by the Center on Alcohol Marketing and Youth (CAMY) found
that youth exposure to alcohol ads on TV increased by 30% from 2001 to 2006.
And although they've banned cigarette ads on television, kids and teens can
still see plenty of people smoking on programs and movies airing on TV. This
kind of "product placement" makes behaviors like smoking and drinking
alcohol seem acceptable. In fact, kids who watch 5 or more hours of TV per day
are far more likely to begin smoking cigarettes than those who watch less than
the recommended 2 hours a day.
Finally, is low learning ability. Too
much TV during the early years has been linked to poor performance in school,
especially in the areas of language and reading. If TV is substituted for
reading and talking with others at a young age, children may have delayed
language development. And they are less able to use imagination. Too much TV
can lead to an overload on the visual part of the brain while depriving other
parts of the brain. Areas of the brain responsible for creative thought and
imagination are under used because watching television doesn’t require these
skills. Also, they are not able to tell apart television from the real world. And
too many fast paced images from watching TV keeps the brain from learning how
to pay attention and also the instant stimulus of TV can cause a child to
become impatient in complex situations. The areas of the brain responsible for
these skills are underused and not fully developed if a young child watches too
much television and plays too many video games which bring poor skills in
planning and judging.
Obviously my arguments can seem to be a
subjective, and there will be plenty of people who think that there are much
more advantages that TV gives. They will give examples of education, enjoyable
contents, and they will say that TV is sometimes good for our health. For
example, there are many exercising promoting programs such as yoga programs..
However, although there are huge amounts of exercising program in Korean
broadcasting, Korean boys’ (15-18) obesity rates took the first place in
the world. And they watch TV 3hours a day according to “polis”. Then, is
exercising programs help with their obesity? What I want to say is that there
is little relationship with the exercising program and real health. Also, of course, TV provides educational programs. However,
there are more non-educational contents like lewd and violent contents. Also,
enjoyable contents are that what makes children a couch potato.
It is not hard
to find sources that want your kids of the disadvantages that are given by TV,
both in the areas of physics and in the areas of psychology. In part, I agree;
that TV also has lots of advantages such as education, and enjoyable contents,
though, are just parts of the TV’s influences. There are more disadvantages
that TV gives to kids. So I strongly recommend you guys to stop showing TV to
your kids (but also to you) and enjoy a healthy body, healthy soul, and healthy
life.
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washington.edu, TV & Children:Television, Health and Development. Retrieved fromhttp://depts.washington.edu/tvhealth/materials/third-party-resources/TV-Children-Television-Health-Development.pdf
우리에게 매우 친숙한 TV를 소재로 잡은 것이 좋아용. TV가 어린이들에게 미치는 좋지 않은 영향을 구조적으로 잘 썼어요 그런데 좀 더 자세하고 구체적인 자료가 있었으면 좋겠어영~~
답글삭제그리고 우리가 써야 하는 5가지 파트를 모두 쓴것 같네요. 저 또한 혜진이의 thesis를 동의해요.
삭제그래서 저는 2점 드릴게요~~