2014년 10월 26일 일요일

conclusion

Obviously my arguments can seem to be a subjective, and there will be plenty of people who think that there are much more advantages that TV gives. They will give examples of education, enjoyable contents, and they will say that TV is sometimes good for our health (against to my argument that watching TV brings obesity and malfunction of organ.) , for example, there are many exercising promoting programs such as yoga programs.. However, although there a huge amounts of exercising program in Korean broadcasting, Korean boys’(15-18) obesity rates took the first place in the world. And they watch TV 3hours a day according to “polinews”. Then, is exercising programs help with their obesity? What I want to say is that there is little relationship with the exercising program and real health. Also, of course TV provides educational programs. However, there are more non-educational contents like lewd and violent contents. Also enjoyable contents are that what makes children a couch potato.It is not hard to find sources that want your kids of the disadvantages that are given by TV, both in the areas of physics – obesity and malfunction of organs – and in the areas of psychology – violence, risky behaviors, and low learning ability. In part, I agree; that TV also has lots of advantages such as education, and enjoyable contents, though, are just parts of the TV’s influences. There are more disadvantages that TV gives to kids. So I strongly recommend you guys to stop showing TV to your kids (but also to you) and enjoy a healthy body, healthy soul, and healthy life.

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